Not very much needed to improve. It drags on sometimes but very good job.
maybe shorten the posts a little? idk but you did AWESOME theres like nothing ot change pretty much.
I liked it, your blog is not as boring as the rest, it has a touch of sence of humor. That is what it makes it perfect. I would go back and do more research though!!!
it was awesome!! it really helped me on my project cuz i usually fall asleep wen i read these biographies but this one had humor in it! not much u need to improve on, but u mite wanna tone it down a little on saying she was pretty. but otherwise nice job!! :)
Use spell check , all their/there in the wrong place !