I liked it, your blog is not as boring as the rest, it has a touch of sence of humor. That is what it makes it perfect. I would go back and do more research though!!!
it was awesome!! it really helped me on my project cuz i usually fall asleep wen i read these biographies but this one had humor in it! not much u need to improve on, but u mite wanna tone it down a little on saying she was pretty. but otherwise nice job!! :)
Not very much needed to improve. It drags on sometimes but very good job.
ReplyDeletemaybe shorten the posts a little? idk but you did AWESOME theres like nothing ot change pretty much.
ReplyDeleteI liked it, your blog is not as boring as the rest, it has a touch of sence of humor. That is what it makes it perfect.
ReplyDeleteI would go back and do more research though!!!
it was awesome!! it really helped me on my project cuz i usually fall asleep wen i read these biographies but this one had humor in it! not much u need to improve on, but u mite wanna tone it down a little on saying she was pretty. but otherwise nice job!! :)
ReplyDeleteUse spell check , all their/there in the wrong place !
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